Peer review of paper number 100
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Dear Micheal
I found the first four paragraphs very hard to make sense of. They are probably very erudite but I need a way of accessing the multisyllabic words strung out one after the other. The theme is I suppose M's struggles as a creative jazz artist in apartheid SA? From fifth paragraph on I find the writing much easier to follow and make sense of. It is an ulluminating piece of subjectivity, borrowed, copied, fragmented and eventual erasure or misrepresentation.
Regards
Devi Sarinjeive
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